Comments:

Marie - 2003-06-11 09:24:22
That was a beautiful poem. I could totally relate to all the pain in the relationship by reading that. Wouldn't it be awesome to be able to capture those moments were there wasn't a thing wrong other than loving the person. Love your writing and will be reading through the rest of your diary!
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vonnie - 2003-06-11 10:36:52
i haven't visited here before, though that might change soon. i enjoyed the poem, you have a lovely way with words...i hope it goes better for you in the future than it did in the past.
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Lauren - 2003-06-11 15:53:19
I clicked on your banner (even though it said "Ignore me" - I could not resist), and I enjoyed your poem. Such pain and emotion you expressed - it was lovely. Well, I'm sure the feeling inspiring said poem was not lovely, but you have a way with words. I'm sure I will visit your diary again.
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kelly - 2003-06-11 19:26:53
i really and truly feel for you, i know what its like to go through something so serious that neither was mature enough to handle. at least that what i got out of it. its so strange how when you write a poem, and it depicts everything you feel and makes total sense to you, can mean a completely different thing to someone else. overall, i enjoyed it. you channeled your pain beautifully. i admire that strength in a person. it also takes guts to admit deep feelings like that. i know thats hard to believe, and some people DO find their feelings, but i loved that your shared them and were open about them. i will be comming back for more. i hope you keep writing.
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intrudereyes - 2003-06-13 01:34:20
that's a beautiful poem
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dizzigemini - 2004-01-19 06:59:03
oooh yes.... oooh yes!!!! holly moses YES!!! as I say... "cosmically the radio tunes into our life, telle-communicating our feelings, every time"......one time I was running away from this guy, named ryyan......-----read about it in the virgo-ryyan saga, in my archive section, it's pretty funny--- well he chased after me, as I sat in the truck, radio on, the song that played was "should I stay or should I go now"....and the song after that was "she runs away" by duncan sheik..... tripped out.... the radio is ssso cosmic...especailly U2 songs, they get me every time. *sting*
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